Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Dark Repercussions (Harry/Many)



Dark Repercussions by Jessiikaa15
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8312363/1/Dark-Repercussions

Great, great story on what happens when Harry is pushed too far.  This is a dark Harry Potter story full of torture, rape, mutilation, angst, drama and surprisingly humor as well. After 5th year the assasain Sang Lys is created and he goes on to collect others for his team. I won't give out names but a few will shock you. The story is well paced and the characterization is interesting. While the characters are very different from canon they are believable and there are no sudden jumps in their development something I detest. You need to go into this story understanding that Harry is fundamentally insane. My only complaint with the story and with all the author's stories is the spelling. While there are some errors due to the fact the author is English most seem to be auto correct giving the wrong word. The author needs a better beta to catch the problems as there is something in every chapter. Other then that which is ignorable the author has done a great job.

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